I'm sorry to say...
... that this was inredibly meh, for me. Yes, you got a bunch of authors together and made some epic project or whatever. Yes Osuka's monster was very neat. Yes NathanielMilburn's part was fantastic.
No to everything else though. Some very emo song with a bunch of slightly less than passably animated anime characters prancing about in what I hope was at least a metaphor for some inner battle, but was probably just a big ol' sword fight with some shadow mirror monster.
Blargh says I. Not my tastes. At least it wasn't a tweenfest though. So kudos for trying out FBF, just get good at it now I guess. Also, why on earth would you chose a song where the singer's voice was so whiny and the lyrics and music were so repetetive?
Oh well, I won't dock you for the music choice. You will get slammed for the visuals though.