Well it's a toss up!
Between you, and you, for my favourite actually on-topic Pico Day submission.
Ty-dizzle, you made my day!
Well it's a toss up!
Between you, and you, for my favourite actually on-topic Pico Day submission.
Ty-dizzle, you made my day!
Thank you MISTER RAT :D
hilarious.
At first I was lost. I thought this was terrible. Just lame tweens. Then it just kept going, and going, and going, and soon I began to shake with laughter.
The ending was pretty nice too.
A masterpiece?
Yes, most certainly a masterpiece. I really, just can't see how anyone could possibly be so dense as the give this anything but a perfect score!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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See all those exclamation points? THAT MEANS I'M BEING SUPER SERIOUS!
This was Godly, mate.
You get a clear cut 10. There were a few issues. Some really stiff tweens and awkward poses, but man, this was such a great little foray beyond the mind-numbing trash we generally get.
When you delved into the frame-by-frame, it looks pretty fantastic. The concept was brilliant, the music choice suited perfectly.
So the only thing I have to say negative, is next time, pay really close attention to those tweens. Work in some easing, and really just only use them is absolutely necessary.
Thanks for the advice! Tweens made my life a bit easier with this one, but I agree they could have been smoothed out a bit. Deadlines are a terrible beast XD
A contemporary masterpiece!
An unrivaled achievement in cinema. Certainly something that has redefined the way we, as a human species of entertainment craving
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God blesses... everyone
Allright, so I thought it was pretty good.
I enjoyed it well enough. You really nailed the expressions. It was a pretty neat idea too. Solid stuff.
I don't get why people are whining about the ending. You'd have to be a pretty big dope not to get it. Some guy calls him a faggot and shit, so what does Tom do? Fucks his wife, the least faggoty behavior possible. It's pretty darn clear there folks.
Anyway, I docked a couple points because I would have prefered, well, not stick figures I guess.
This is a masterpiece.
I don't know wht I forgot to review this when it came out.
Sure it was unclean and the animation was minimal, but it heightened the story. You know I've always loved your work, but this was the icing on the cake.
I wish you'd submit more flashes, I'd probably have you on my favourite author's list.
I guess if there was something to work on, It'd be slightly cleaner linework. Not too much though, because the messyness adds to the atmosphere.
Thanks, yeah I do need to submit more but im trying to draw better and get more control over flash.
Ah hell time to re-review this.
Ok, it was bad. You stole some else eles' artwork and sloppily tweened it around. It wasn't funny really. Anyone could have come up with those jokes.
Also, you submitted this a couple days ago, and I have to say resubmitting it like this is pretty lame. Really lame, actually. It should be deleted, imo.
Finally all the effects you DID draw in yourself looked terrible.
My favourite part.
I've been a mild fan of Minushi since the first part you released. I've just rewatched all the parts on Newgrounds all the way through, and this was my favourite so far.
The smile Tinker gives is so warm that I nearly shat myself. Brilliant expression you did. Also when he reveals his robot legs, the way your staged the scene was fantastic.
My big complaint is that the colouring and linework on the people isn't very clean, and can get fairly distracting in the close-ups. Also, the voice acting is pretty, well, bad.
Still this is a master work and I think I just might buy the DVD.
lmao holy shit this was great.
Ok, so I'll get the negatives out of the way first here. You could have done with alot more inbetweens on this in the FBF, and your tweens were pretty stiff. I'll recommend spending more time working out your easing. I would have liked to see some more details to the environmental animation as well. Grass rustling, etc.
Aside from that, I'd say this was pretty flawless. Great timing, silly and fun, good sound and music choice, unique concept and idea. Definitely worth the watch.
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